Pretty good videos man, gonna have to point out an obvious fact though, you were camping by YouTube standards.
As much as the two Dom videos are text book examples of how you should play Domination, they aren't something a viewer wants to see. Textbook Domination is boring. Also, 11 minutes is a bit long for your first attempt at a commentary, not a bad job, but thats a long time to talk when you've never done it before.
