Mar 7, 2012 5:37 PM
need help?
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http://gameolosophy.com/games/action/call-of-duty-mw3-how-to-come-in-first/
I have written an article on how to become a great player. Please read it and give me some feedback I am a beginner writer and I want to write to help others. Thanks
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Some puncuation could be better. If I saw correctly I saw some periods instead of commas. Grant it im not the best with this stuff so i may be wrong but you did a good job! i like your work alot!!