I(1*)am looking for people who would like to help me sue Infinity Ward for allowing cheats in MW3, (2*)we pay good money for this game and it is almost impossible to play (*3)it without cheaters who will ruin your gaming expirience.The people who made this game (4*)build those cheats in, (*5) i have no clue why (*5)the would do this but (6*)the do. I believe that this is (*7)unaceptable and NOT why (*8)i payed so much money to play this game. The reason (*9)i want to sue these people is not for money, (**10)i just want them to fix this so no cheating can be allowed in online gaming. (*11)they (*12)coused it, they need to fix this.(*13) and fast! Hope to hear from as much people as possible so we can make a stand!(*14)
- 1: Insert a space in between 'I' and 'Am'
- 2: 'We' You did not buy this, your mom did.
- 3: The extra 'It' is not needed.
- 4: 'Build' is present tense, use past tense 'built'.
- 5: Add a 'y' at the end of 'the'.
- 6: Once again, add a 'y' at the end of 'the'.
- 7: 'Unaceptable' is spelled 'Unacceptable'
- 8: For a second time, you did not buy this. Your parents did.
- 9: Upper-case the 'i' when it is alone.
- 10: A) Upper case the 'i' B) Put some transition words.
- 11: 'they' needs to be 'They' since it is the first word in the sentence.
- 12: 'coused' is spelled 'caused'.
- 13: That is not a proper sentence.
- 14: At this point you should shut the **** up.
Now, I politely corrected your fourth grade grammar. The least you could do is to politely stay off the forums.
